Friday, August 5, 2011

I am a Student

I am a student
I can smell the flowers wafting down the class
I hear the quite talking
I see the concentration on people faces
I feel the cold air coming right for me
I feel so happy
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 11, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    Hi renee its Taelyn I just want you to know that
    your 5 sences story is relly good. I liked the way you said that you can smell the flowers wafting down the class

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  2. MelanieAugust 11, 2011 at 7:34 PM

    Hi Renee
    It was great reading your poem. I really like that you are happy at school.
    Ms Matthews

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